screendeckdesign

quick screenshot
::work in progress::
this is the image I'll submit for the deck contest [link] not finished yet and I'd like to read some suggestions..

9599 x 2405 pixel
300dpi
530 megabyte
15 min to open
20 min to save
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please leave a lot of suggestions but please be sincere!!!

all the images I used are taken by myself and I wanted re-created about the same design I used for DA contest...

please help me.